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John G's avatar

Chapter two when

OGRE's avatar

This is not outside the realm of possibility.

Brainwashed people sometimes snap out of it when biological urges kick in.

As one person put it (I can't remember who):

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A "useful idiot" is someone easily manipulated into serving a cause they don't understand and wouldn't support if they knew the truth.

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I guarantee that most people on the left wouldn't support the left -- if they knew the truth.

Who would sign up for a death cult? Even the Kool-Aid drinkers following Jim Jones, didn't join with suicide in mind.

Crimson's avatar

😂 oh my god. This walks the line of parody but just plays it so straight. I died when the organizers name was Renee, come on bro.

Top Shelf Theology's avatar

THIS. So many 4th wall breaking moments, and yet I was still gripped, this is epic!

Brian B's avatar

This is a perfect Substack bodice-ripper.

don's avatar

And in the cold Minnesota winter, I could feel something inside of me... was heating up...

Sir_Zorg's avatar

Lol

Parker Longbaugh's avatar

Hubba hubba!

Nookie's avatar

Great stuff! “Chris Riker” is a perfect name.

Wouter's avatar

0/10 no tail

😂

Top Shelf Theology's avatar

Zomg chill dude, the best sex is after a long hard foreplay!

the long warred's avatar

🤣🤣🤣

James's avatar

Part Two please — I wanna hear how she gets ploughed out.

Natalie Sandoval's avatar

oooh i didn't realize you were on substack!! just wrote a piece featuring ur fanfic, very nice work

https://stateoftheday.us/p/start-saying-no-to-women

TJ's avatar

++1

Basically's avatar

You need to reupload this to ao3 and wattpad asap

Bits of Paul's avatar

Amazing work, incredible, 10/10.